Your timing is good. The song has a nice wieght to it. The actual sounds you're using... well they don't really do it for me, but the structure is beautiful.
Melody is good, i like the beat - it has a feel-good vibe to it. The vocals could be tweaked slightly, maybe increased in volume a bit.
Thanks, glad you like it!
What program(s) are you using for the drum samples? My Line 6 (the cheapy version) came with riffworks and ableton, but the drum samples are pretty lame.
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